Erm.. Right, ok...
First of all you need how to animate a little better and how to make different angles off the characters, then make your own damn voices and if you dont have a microphone get voice actors god damnit!
And what is that fatso doing in it? Sure its kinda funny when they beat him up, when he sings.. But i think its pretty stupid. Hope the third one will be better, this was decent, I'm not saying that it sucked or anything but it wasnt what i call firstside material.
Best of luck
~Metal Clock